I was very sorry that I had to miss our first meeting but thank you all for your comments on “Mulka’s Cave”, which June kindly read for me. I’ve made some changes to the poem and hopefully I have managed to improve it!
The feelings and thoughts that gave rise to “Mulka’sCave” are not particularly original but to me they are very poignant. The cave was one of two or three places that I’ve visited in
what I have seen and read, however naïve their beliefs may appear to us, they
did not fall into the error of thinking that they were separate from the natural world or superior to it – let alone thinking that they were in some way ”in charge” of it!
MULKA'S CAVE
stripped, exposed
and violated.
Gaping nakedly.
We hesitate, peering in -
embarrassed, maybe by such simplicity
seeing prints of hands – and nothing more.
What brought them to this place?
Who were the last man and child,
to fill their mouths with thick, sour ochre
And lifting up their hands
spray their presence on this rock?
Lost, the memory, and the meaning.
Lost, the joy of man and child, hand in hand,
flesh and bones breathing in the sun,
blood beating through ancient veins
as they breathed at one the with sheltering trees
and winds’ sigh.
Dingoes stripped and scattered their bones
trees drank their sap,
ants devoured their last fragments
and no trace left but the handprints,
only the handprints.
And a vacancy – an eternal absence,
a gap in nature.
Turning our backs, we return along the metal ramp,
past the felled trees and the toilet block,
to the souvenir shop, Made in
and the bistro, offering Mediterranean Cuisine.
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